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    Midnight Traveler and the Mystery Man

    I decided to set out for a nighttime drive out in a road much resembling either the countryside or a dead end road. As I drove down the road, I saw white fence like barriers bordered around land but they looked so alike that after a while I might as well have thought that they were all linked together. After driving for sometime down a straight stretch of road, I drove around a corner and stopped at a speed limit sign where the fences stopped. I was the only midnight traveler on this deserted stretch of road, so I stopped the car by the sign and decided to go for a walk on the empty road in front of me. I walked a few feet until I saw what looked like a young man walking towards me. I must have accidentally left the headlights on because I could clearly see him and he was trying to say something but no sound came from him. I stood there watching him for a few minutes until I saw that he was walking faster towards me and that time I could make out that he was saying "help me". Frightened, I ran a few feet and then I turned around- the man was no longer there. All that my headlights were now beaming on was the empty stretch of road up ahead where the man was a few minutes ago. The man had simply vanished into thin air as I was unable to see him in the other directions near the road. Shrugging off what had happened, I walked back to my car and drove away...
    Midnight Traveler and the Mystery Man, a General fanfic - FictionPress.com

    I wrote this when I was in Grade 11 when I had nothing to do during my drama and video class. I liked it so much that I posted it on the website above.

    You'll notice the main character has no specified sex, and I purposely designed them that way, for two reasons.

    One, I was stuck trying to decide whether the character should be male or female. I didn't want to choose a specific gender, and end up regretting it later.

    Two, a specific gender may not sit well with the reader. If I kept the gender as "unknown"; then the reader can use their imagination, and think about the character in a way that fits for them.
    RIP "Lyle Stevik"
    19?? - 2001
    Never identified, but not forgotten.

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    Midnight Traveler and the Mystery Man, a General fanfic - FictionPress.com

    I wrote this when I was in Grade 11 when I had nothing to do during my drama and video class. I liked it so much that I posted it on the website above.

    You'll notice the main character has no specified sex, and I purposely designed them that way, for two reasons.

    One, I was stuck trying to decide whether the character should be male or female. I didn't want to choose a specific gender, and end up regretting it later.

    Two, a specific gender may not sit well with the reader. If I kept the gender as "unknown"; then the reader can use their imagination, and think about the character in a way that fits for them.
    Well done, I like it, I hope to see more of your work.
    When the femanazis tell me it's their way or the highway I tell them to fuck off and die, because at lest the highway leads to new and intresting places, their ways is a dead end.

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    Thanks. I wrote another story about 2 runaways for English 11 and I never got to show it to my teacher
    RIP "Lyle Stevik"
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    Thanks. I wrote another story about 2 runaways for English 11 and I never got to show it to my teacher
    Really, I'd like to see that story, I have posted a few of my stories if you care to take a read, I could use some feedback if you don't mind.
    Do you write alot of stories?, if so I'd like to see them
    When the femanazis tell me it's their way or the highway I tell them to fuck off and die, because at lest the highway leads to new and intresting places, their ways is a dead end.

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    Re: My short story

    A lot of my stories are written in screenplay format!


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    A lot of my stories are written in screenplay format!
    Really, thinking of making them into a moive?
    When the femanazis tell me it's their way or the highway I tell them to fuck off and die, because at lest the highway leads to new and intresting places, their ways is a dead end.


 

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